Peer Review

Peer Review #3

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Paige, I enjoyed reading your paper. You had very many strong points on how you do not believe narrative can tell your life. I liked how you talked about your Papa, but I think you should tie that back to how narrative cannot tell your life story a little more clearly. It should not take … [Read more…]

Peer Review #2

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  Jeremy- You did very well in your paper, but there were a few main places that could use improvement. I would include a conclusion to wrap up your paper. In your main body paragraphs, you include many interesting points that have a lot of supporting details, but in one paragraph that I commented on … [Read more…]